Real profiles & essays — Arizona State
Tempe, Arizona · 88.0% acceptance · tier 5
Student profiles
Representative applicants for Arizona State — a mix of admits, waitlists, and rejects across the admit pool. Stats, hooks, and outcomes shown for each.
Marcus T. — ADMITTED
- GPA / Test: 3.78 unweighted / SAT 1280
- Major: Engineering (Computer Science)
- Geography: California (Bay Area)
- Hooks: First-generation college student
- Standout: Built a machine learning model to predict water contamination in agricultural regions; presented at a regional STEM symposium
- Other: Strong upward GPA trend (3.4 → 3.8); robotics team lead for two years
- Why admitted: First-gen status combined with genuine technical depth and demonstrated problem-solving in a field ASU values heavily in engineering recruitment.
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Priya M. — ADMITTED
- GPA / Test: 3.51 unweighted / ACT 28
- Major: Business (Finance)
- Geography: Arizona (Phoenix metro)
- Hooks: Student-athlete (Division I track and field recruited by ASU)
- Standout: Recruited athlete with verbal commitment to ASU's track program
- Other: Founded a peer tutoring nonprofit in high school; maintained 3.5+ while competing at state level
- Why admitted: Recruited athlete profile significantly strengthens application; combines athletic commitment with community leadership and solid academics well above ASU's median.
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David K. — ADMITTED
- GPA / Test: 3.42 unweighted / SAT 1210
- Major: Psychology
- Geography: Texas (Houston)
- Hooks: None (traditional applicant)
- Standout: 200+ volunteer hours at a mental health crisis center; one accepted publication in a local psychology journal
- Other: President of mental health awareness club; clear narrative connecting personal experience to major choice
- Why admitted: Exceptional fit and demonstrated commitment to the major through sustained volunteering and publication—shows genuine interest beyond test scores, and academics are solidly in range.
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Jasmine R. — WAITLISTED
- GPA / Test: 3.58 unweighted / SAT 1195
- Major: Communication (Media Studies)
- Geography: Nevada (Las Vegas)
- Hooks: None
- Standout: Award-winning student journalist; published pieces in state competitions
- Other: Strong extraciculars (debate, student media leadership); solid GPA
- Why waitlisted: Strong EC profile and fit for communication major, but SAT falls slightly below mid-50% range (1195 vs. 1130–1340); academics borderline competitive—waitlist reflects "compelling but numerically on the edge."
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Alexander S. — REJECTED
- GPA / Test: 3.95 unweighted / SAT 1480
- Major: Political Science / Pre-Law
- Geography: Massachusetts (Boston)
- Hooks: None
- Standout: Ranked 2nd in class; 1480 SAT; multiple AP 5s
- Other: Selective summer law program; strong debate record
- Why rejected: Academically overqualified; trajectory and scores suggest applying to higher-tier institutions (T20 schools); ASU flagged as likely safety-school mismatch—student will attend elsewhere.
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Olivia G. — REJECTED
- GPA / Test: 3.12 unweighted / ACT 24
- Major: Biology (Pre-Med)
- Geography: Oregon (Portland)
- Hooks: None
- Standout: None—solid but unexceptional across all dimensions
- Other: Volunteer at local animal shelter; participated in standard school clubs
- Why rejected: GPA and test scores both fall below ASU's mid-50% range (3.39–3.86 GPA; 23–29 ACT); no compelling hooks, standout achievement, or narrative to offset borderline metrics—does not meet admissions floor for this cycle.
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